Magazine title progress

The masthead looks too disorganised as the letters are too far apart and not in proportion. Personally, it does not have that iconic feel to it, meaning that it is not very symbolic enough to be recognised. The slogan is missing and this is vital to engage the audience's eye to show awareness

I really like this other development that I made for the masthead as it now looks really neat and refined through a 'square' theme to make it almost look like a product label or tags; I wanted it to catch the audience's eye instantly.

I used the 'Lighten' effect in Photoshop to create this transparent look of the masthead. it looks very well combined with the main image but I feel that it involves too much of the background which loses its eye catching quality.